
A cloud of synchronized gnats caught my eye.
I stood and watched,
Their dance of side to side, low, high.
To something classical —
Is it Mozart’s Piano Sonatas? Aquatic!
Moisture! Moisture! (entered my mind)
This could be problematic.
I chose to forget about them; until now.
7:53, this poem must end soon…
I’m getting tired of punctuation
Self-discipline being strewn,
Throughout this poem;
I’ve left out a few.
“Amusing what holds my attention nowadays”
Punctuation; Gnats! Who knew?
I probably didn’t use them all correctly either. 😁
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What fun! gnats are like periods of exclamation points when they are slapped. I get tired of punctuation.
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Ha! This is an amusing verse. I rather love the punctuation, interspersing them all over in a poem. But yes, they can be tiresome too.
A pleasant reading experience. 🙂
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